A bizarre turn of events
Brings a weeping flower
Yet to bloom, on the verge
The essence seems to have been lost
Amidst the gloomy shadows
A pale, frail being, loses its identity
The voices, reach out, far and wide
The call for help, surpasses the reason
An ability that seems to be submerged
Beneath layers of soliude
Restraining emotions and feelings
Seeking comfort and consolation
The answers aren't easy
The questions don't have a form
The presence overpowers the moment
A movement that is painfully slow
The thrust felt beyond all depths
A lone image stands without a purpose.
8 comments:
Thank you for the add-on!
Brings a weeping flowerYet to bloom, on the verge The essence seems to have been lostAmidst the gloomy shadowsA pale, frail being, loses its identity
(...on the verge....)some link missing thereafter...as u go on to..(The essence seems to have been lost)
(The presence overpowers the moment A movement that is painfully slow)...is there a spelling mistake here?
Sorry not doing a critical appreciation....just found some links missing.
TO Moonlight
Hey thanks a lot for the critical appreciation.. the links I doubt is missing, since as the title suggests, the whole thing is mind over matter, And the mind is always full of things and its the same with this too...
No spelling mistake on the movement and moment line too!!!
Keep them coming and i appreciate it:)
hi thr hows ya? long time..how have u been?
Dont have ne idea wat u wrote abt or why or nething.....But i understood it.....
now tat doesnt make sense,i know....but i guess i can put it in a better way if i say i related to it....
or maybe its just the fact tats 2 in the nite!! :)
Take care.....
yup i remember :) let me see when i can plan a trip thr....waise r u having any plans of coming to bbay
Hello...just wanted to know how you are doing...how is the back?
moonlight
Just to say hello. hope all is well:)
AMAZING is the word I have here for you Arvind... Really touching...
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